Thursday 17 November 2011

Episode 2 - Revised

I feel like this episode needs a little more happening in it.

Greg Doesn’t Party

Main Points

- Greg is interviewed and he tries to act nice to make himself look better than he is
- However this shroud is lifted when a children's party gets under way
- The kids are loud and obnoxious, making Greg run back and forth to bring them refills and burgers
- The kids then make fun of him and say he looks like a vampire
- The staff in the back find it funny and they make fun of him too
- Greg sees them doing it and makes them all stay behind and clean everything Quick Stop owns.
- Whilst Greg puts his feet up in the managerial office



NEW:
The camera crew gets to meet and interview Greg today; the Deputy Manager. From first impressions he appears very nice and almost loveable, baffling other employees with attempted high fives. However his temper quickly wears thin during a children's birthday party.

Taking up half of the available seating is a rabble of young children who booked the diner for a birthday party. Maj is not in today, so as the acting Manager; Greg has to be on his best behavior so as not to upset the kids...or the paying parents. But before long his true colours come out when the kids start to make fun of him. They say he looks like a vampire and put chips under their top lips to look like fangs. The other staff see this and do the same, making fun of Greg. However Greg notices this and demands they stay after close to clean everything the Quick Stop owns, much to everyone's annoyance.

Going back out to the party in a rage, Greg manages to upset all of the children by shouting at them all as they manage to scream louder, which results in the parents not paying for the service.



OLD:
Greg makes his first appearance in the diner today. The camera crew interviews him and first impressions suggest he is very nice and almost lovable, attempting to high five other employees whilst they look on confused. However this soon changes as the children’s party booked for the day arrives.
Greg is out serving them when they start making fun of the way he looks, saying he is like a vampire. The kids all put chips in their mouths to look like fangs and when he gets back to the kitchen he sees that some of the other staff are also doing it to make fun of him. Seeing this Greg loses his temper on camera and his true colours are revealed. Demanding all of the employees get back to work and makes them stay after work cleaning the entire footprint of the Quick Stop Diner inside and out.

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