Saturday 19 November 2011

Episode 6 - Revised

After reading this back I have realised that not much really happens throughout it. So I added another story line within the episode so it is more interesting.

A Mother's Love

Main Points
- Greg making demands and abusing his powers
- Ernie messes up his order
- Ernie takes it back and complains about Greg to the others
- Greg hears this and kicks off at them
- his mum comes in and belittles him, calling him currant bun
- the other staff make fun of him
- Baz and Turner are seeing how many cups they can stack or how high they can stack things.

NEW:
Greg starts the day in a bad mood, barking orders and abusing his Deputy Managerial powers. It's the last straw after Ernie incorrectly makes his lunch, Greg becomes almost violent and demands he remake it. Ernie goes to the back and complains about Greg to Baz and Turner, who pay little attention.

Greg overhears this and tears into Ernie. However is stopped short when a female voice bellows over him...Greg's mother; she has come for lunch. Grabbing him by the ear, she drags him to the middle of the diner, humiliating him in front of everyone. Greg is forced to apologise to Ernie, as Harold and Heema stand there trying not to laugh. Then everyone sees Greg shrink in front of their eyes as his mother calls him her 'currant bun'. Greg grabs two bags of food and drags his mother out of the restaurant.

Meanwhile, Baz and Turner remain oblivious to the drama as they have a competition to see who can make the highest tower, involving cups, dips and the tricky french fry pyramid.

Greg returns to all of the employees making sly jokes about his mother's pet name for him. This only makes Greg angry and he begins a plot to get back at them at the 'Festival of Food' next week.

OLD:
Greg starts the day making a lot of demands and abusing his managerial powers yet again. Ernie is to make Greg’s lunch as he sits down in the diner. However he screws it up and brings the wrong one, Greg naturally becomes more irritated with everyone and demands Ernie get the right one. Taking it back, Ernie complains about Greg to the others (Baz and Turner) who convince him to spit in it. Little does he no Greg is watching over them. As Greg begins to shout a female voice carries over Greg’s and his face drops…it is Greg’s mum. Greg still lives with his mum and today she comes in and sees him shouting at Ernie, she takes him by the ear and drags him out to the centre of the diner. There she humiliates him by shouting back at him and making him shrink down to the size of a pea in the other employees’ eyes. She calls him her currant bun, because when he was younger he had a lot of acne on his face.
The others in the diner see Greg in a new light today and spend the day making fun of him about his mother’s pet name for him, even Maj gets in a jokey jibe about it. This upsets Greg and makes him very angry, so he begins a devious plot that he plans to put into action during the next episode when he is out of the diner at the town’s yearly food festival

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