Saturday 19 November 2011

Episode 5 - Revised

Management Style

Main Points 


- Harold's first day back and shows Maj his frying
- Greg sabotages the drinks machine as he is bored
- Maj has to help on the checkouts and when she uses the drinks machine she gets soaked
- Maj has to go home and change
- Greg is left in charge
- He harasses Harold
- Harold then forgets his training and deep fries everything
- Heema calms him down whilst returning order to the diner just before Maj gets back




NEW:
It's Harold's first day back after his training and Maj is keen to see what he has learnt. After a few test runs she is impressed with Harold's progress and allows him to use the fryer.

Greg is bored and wants to cause a little carnage. He skulks around the back of the checkouts and fiddles with the nozzle flow strength on the drinks machine...turning it to max!

As business picks up Maj helps out on the tills, and things are running smoothly. That is until she pours a drink...The nozzle explodes in her face soaking her head to toe. As a result she has head home to change her uniform. With Maj incapacitated for a short while, Greg is left in charge.

He spends some time in the office with his feet up, but soon gets bored and leaves to cause a little more chaos. He demands Ernie go out to clean the gutters and empty the bins. Then focusses his attention on Harold, harassing him for his condition.

Greg heads back to the office pleased with himself. Harold becomes angry and insecure, frying everything in sight; from his hat and shoes to customers bagged orders. His training has become lost behind the fear and anxiety Greg has stirred up.

Heema notices this and is soon able to calm Harold down. She sees Greg in the office doing very little, so takes the management of the diner into her own hands. Just able to get things under control as the rush calms down and Maj returns.




OLD:
It is Harold’s first day back after his training session and Maj is eager to see if he has practiced enough to be left alone working the fryer. After a few test runs, she is impressed with what Harold has learnt.
Meanwhile Greg is skulking around near the back of the checkouts, he is carrying a pair of pliers and looking rather suspicious. When he sees the camera crew following him he jumps, explaining that he is just carrying out some routine checks and repairs.
During which time Maj jumps onto the checkouts with Heema as business suddenly picks up. With Maj’s extra help things are running smoothly, that is until she goes to use the drinks machine Greg ‘repaired’…as she is serving a customer; the nozzle explodes in her face and soaks her with sticky smelly drink. Maj now has to make a run home to change her uniform, as she is drenched from head to toe. With Maj incapacitated for a few hours, Greg is left in charge. He spends most of his time in the office with his feet up, away from any customers and problems whilst the others are out front running around after orders. Greg soon becomes bored and comes out to cause a little chaos.
Ernie has been trouble free for some time now, much to Greg’s disliking, so seeing this he decides to give him some dirty work. Sending Ernie outside to clean the gutters and empty the bins.
Greg then focuses his attention on Harold, harassing him about his condition. As he heads back to the office Greg leaves Harold to stew in the anger and insecurities he has stirred up in his verbal attack. Harold then begins deep frying everything he can get his hands on; from his hat and shoes, to customers whole bagged orders. Harold’s training has become lost deep within the recesses of his adolescent brain. Heema quickly spots this as she passes and is able to calm Harold down. She also notices Greg is in the office doing very little, so takes the management of the diner into her own hands. She is able to get things under control just as the rush calms down and as Maj returns.

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