Saturday 19 November 2011

Episode 7 - Revised

Festival of Revenge

Main points
- Heema and Ernie are accompanied to the food festival by Greg
- Greg slips away and goes to a pet store
- In the meantime Heema and Ernie are left to run the stall alone during the busiest period
- Back at the diner things are quiet and Maj notices a pattern in the suggestion box
- Greg is gone a while and returns to see them get 4th place in the festival

NEW:
The 'Festival of Fast Food' is in town, here all of the town’s fast food companies compete for the title of ‘Fastest Food in Town’. Heema and Ernie are chosen to man the Quick Stop stall, and not one to miss a day out of the diner; Greg offers to accompany them. However Greg has an ulterior motive for getting out of the diner today, it is here where the first stage of his plan to punish the others for making fun of him can begin.

During the busiest period of the day, Greg leaves Heema and Ernie to struggle with the massive orders building up and sneaks down a side street. The cameras follow him at a distance, unbeknown to Greg, and see him enter a pet store.

Back at the diner, business is slow. It gives a chance for Maj to read from the suggestion box, and she is surprised to see so many great reviews about Greg in such similar handwriting.

Greg is gone for a long time and when he returns the queues have gone and the festival has all but finished. Thanks to Greg, Quick Stop finishes in 4th place.

OLD:
Heema and Ernie are sent out of the diner to the town square to man a Quick Stop stall at the ‘Festival of Fast Food’. Here all of the town’s fast food companies compete for the title of ‘Fastest Food in Town’.
Greg asks to take Heema and Ernie there; he’s not one to miss out on a day out of the diner. However Greg has an ulterior motive for getting out of the diner this day, it is here where the first stage of his plan for punishing the others for making fun of him can commence.
During the busiest period of the day, where the queues extend for meters; Greg leaves Heema and Ernie to struggle with the massive orders building up and heads off down a side street. The cameras follow him at a distance unknown to Greg and see him enter a pet store. Greg is only gone for a short while so Heema and Ernie don’t even notice he has gone.
Meanwhile back at the diner, business is very slow as everyone is out at the ‘Festival of Fast Food’. It gives a chance for Maj to read from the suggestion box, and is surprised when she sees so many great reviews regarding Greg in very similar handwriting.

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